All Comments on 'Sweet Dreams'

by Texas Tease

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Excellent telling of the story of fucking.

The words you choose, and when you choose to use them, always makes my dick very hard, and I love to let it throb as I read.

What I didn't feel got quite enough development was the notion of phone sex as a pre-cursor to this connection. As a matter of fact, I didn't initially identify the transition from phone conversation to actual encounter, so perhaps that could have been developed more thoroughly.

But overall, another excellent story... please keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Mm

So hot, yet beautiful

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