All Comments on 'Sweet Dreams'

by TheSensualist65

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oldpoet451oldpoet451over 8 years ago
Excellent

Very good, very hot. Keep writing!

Prolonged_Debut10Prolonged_Debut10over 8 years ago
Excellent

I truly believe you should have continued on a few more paragraphs about their tryst, but you don't fool with perfection.

Missy10256Missy10256over 8 years ago

Would love to see this turn into a multi chapter story! 5 stars and favorited

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