All Comments on 'Sweet Hitchhiker Ch. 01'

Sheer storytelling. Thank you, Q. Post again, please. Randi.

I've just finished going through your back catalogue, it's good to see you still publishing

What a wild couple! They must be meant for each other.

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Wow! That was quite the beginning! Looking forward to see what you have in mind for this couple.

Cheers

SAGE

Interesting beginning, but I do not have high hopes for the relationship. She will stab him and take everything she can. Very well written though and I am curious where the author is going to take this tale.

Sincerely,

Payenbrant

Great start looking forward to more, thanks.

I should have added, great to have an anti-racist character, too much casual and institutionalised racism in far too many countries these days.

Strangely, I found it very hard to get into the story.

And I have no idea why?

Waiting to read the rest.

Thank you for sharing your talent.

Off to a fine start, and I'll be looking for part 2. 5 stars to keep you motivated:)

Great to see a Q1 story pop up and you didn’t disappoint. Having racial banter without being racist is a nice change from all the negative stereotypes I usually see in LW, which are always a real turn-off for me. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.

Great story! Keep writing and don't let me down on this. I love happy endings and WMBF sex is super hot.

Great start. Lovin’ the characters. 5*.

Good first part. But sooner or later she's gonna kill someone. Hope it isn't our main man. D

Great start to a new story! Good to see that you are still plucking away! Like most of your stories, that characters are a little to big to be real, but it always works for you. Thanks for the entertainment.

My ears always perk up when I see your name under a story. The intro was very confusing with the MC working for two “uncles”. Ending the tropical farm uncle as Uncle Sam would have helped a lot. The only downer for the story so far is the genre you placed it in. We now know how this ends as I find myself cheering them on. Kind of depressing. Great narrative and plot development, as always. 4.8*

I love diversity. And these two are as diverse as it gets. there is going to be racism in America until there is but one race. Won't be in my lifetime sorry to say.

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Wow! Another great story from a master. I look forward to your next chapter.

Delighted to see a new story from you, and eager to see where you take us.

Great story. Only thing wrong with it is it is toooo damn short...

Looking forward to the next chapter. Hope we don't have to wait too long.

Not sure if I've ever seen a more unique method for two people to meet and begin a relationship. Great imagination by the author.

Loved seeing Gastonia mentioned. Lived there for a couple of years a long time ago.

Wow, this guy is only two years older then me and we lived some of the same. Just I'm a Yankee.

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If ya been in Nam you will never forget it. I was a no-way-in-hell would I smoke, two days after being in land I had my first joint. It was the only way to come down off the intense fear to get any restful sleep. Weed grew wild along the river/canals, we would pluck sum going up shit-creek and our engineman would put it on the manifold to dry out. Getting back to base our rear gunner was a rolling maestro making stogies. Just enough Nam stuff to not make me remember, much.

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This looks like a fun one for ya, Master Q. Looking forward to Part 2.

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5*****, Hooyah, Salutes....

For people of a certain age, this is a magical mystery tour. Much appreciation.

I agree that it is a strange beginning but it is well presented and I look forward to the next chapter(s). Great start to the story.

Another example of why many of us consider you the best writer on Literotica. Can't wait for part 2. Thanks for sharing your talent.

Hooked

You write a good story

Another good beginning to a nice story, I look forward to more

Thanks for writing

I guess it's an omen, I put on my "almost too ratty to wea"r Double Door Inn tee shirt this morning. It's paying off in spades. Good start to the story. I had forgotten the Open Kitchen...thanks for that memory refresher. 5* from me.

Good tale. Look forward to how it develops

5 stars

Good read, as always. Thanks.

You are a hell of a writer. I'm looking forward to read the next chapter. Thanks

Always good to see a new story from you!

Why the heck do somebody wants to do anything with someone who nearly gutted his insides out and probably stomped on it. Red flag all over Angel and the MC is too so sure of himself to see it. Trouble ahead.

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Sorry qhm1. I do love you as a writer but really once I got to the part of Angel and MC getting together I skipped to the last two paragraphs of the story. Suddenly I got bored.

Very good as usual! Thank you.

What was he driving? A horse and cart? Twenty miles out of Gastonia and an hour later they were still in the middle of nowhere. Just nitpicking. Love this authors work but often has little fuckups.

Being from Q I'm sure this is great, but it would be helpful to know how many chapters and how often they'll post.

Not bad, not good, mostly boring till now. It would have been better to give some hints on where this tale is heading. 2* for now.

Top shelf so far, 5 Golden ones thank you. Colour has no roll to play in life or love, people are people the finest of who do not judge but learn.

I always rush to read your stories, they are great! Glad to see you are posting!

Hot dam! Five big stars. I thought you might be in witness protection. Glad to see you back in action!

Helluva’ tale. I miss the 70’s.

Meh, not a fan of the two of them getting together. So far she’s hot and he’s stupid to get involved with her.

I'm a little lost... Perhaps I don't understand English well. But what was the point of this squiggle with a matched dog? Analogies? Contrasts? To be honest, in the episode with the "dating in the car" incident, I expected the dog to jump out of the back seat and bite her hand with a knife...

I usually enjoy your stories, but couldn't get into this one. Part of the problem is that there's still no wife, much less a loving wife. There is also way to much of a rather disjointed background dump that probably could (and should) have been trimmed down and presented better.

I presume that a later chapter will have content appropriate for this category, but so far it fails to deliver on expectations.

Interesting characters. Can't wait to see where this one goes.

Waiting impatiently for more, I love your stories. I'm happy giving 5 stars, even with more chapters to come, because I know you'll never lead us into some kind of cuckold crap. Thrilled to have another story from the Q. Thanks for posting.

Really bored reading this...still waiting for the LW relevance.

Thanks for an interesting read

Brought back some memories.

To jimmythep, do you actually think there was less racism in the past?

It might work out if she keeps the knife in her pocket. Four stars ⭐️ for this one.

Enjoying the build up

I thoroughly enjoyed this part. Please keep them coming. I hate waiting months

1* Wrong category!

Im hoping there is a tie to loving wives… it you write so well I really will read the rest with glee.

Interesting story from a reader in NE Tennessee that finds it interesting that local cities are included in stories online. One of my wildest hookups was a black girl I went through grade school with but didn't really know at that time. We ran into each other years later and hooked up that night and the following morning before she disappeared again and I have never seen her again but she told some people who I know really well about what happened on social media which I have never had

I enjoyed this.

Funny, how the category gives the plot away. That, and the story being multi parts. The details will still be interesting: how long will they be married before she fucks him over? Will they have children by then, or will it be the race of the child that alerts him to her whoring? She's gonna claim she was trying to save his life by fucking whoever she ends up fucking. Or maybe she'll jump in front of a bullet? Lots of options; amaze us.

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Note to readers: If ANYONE sticks a knife in you for any reason and you've got a gun, either shoot the assailant or shoot yourself, in the head, cause one of you is already brain dead.

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Minor plot fail with the guns. You are not going to find all, or even most, of your brass from an auto-ejecting gun fired in heavy brushy woods. In a mowed city park, you might find most. In North Carolina your canoe does not have to be registered, but like a drug grower would use a traceable canoe anyway. And if any police authority found an abandoned canoe with a nice 9mm. laying in the bottom, the first thing she'll do is trace the serial number. If the gun is hot it will be destroyed. If the gun is clean it will be kept or sold, probably to the same person who buys the canoe. Get real.

He’s basically trying to tame a feral cat. It’s not going to work.

Youll one of my faves.

LOVE slap-hapy-papy#9

Another winner, Q! Thanks for all the entertaining reads over the yrs.

Mega kudos, five stars.

Cheers!!

WS

Looks like another classic

Ok so far, but 3 pages and we still don’t know what the story is about.

Um...Union Grove NC to Charlotte is about 60 miles. Union Grove NC to Gastonia NC is about 72 miles. What Union Grove is he in?

You really know how to write. Please don't keep us waiting for part 2. 5 stars

Superb writing, great story. Thanks so much.

great writing

Always a good day when Q serves us up a new story. Afraid where this might lead since Angel already admitted to past cheating, but the ride alone [pun intended] will be worth it! 5 stars

Pretty good for a white man. Always a good line for a mixed couple, good stuff!

Very well done! 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS! Thanks.

Excellent! Thank you for sharing this with us!

Love it, keep em comin!

Looks like trouble ahead

Nice. Very nice. Excellent story. Thank you.

Well, it is a different opening from the usual. Good writing as expected. 5 stars. Thanks.

Yea tarhills!

A new Q-story! Can't get much better.

Gret story so far, Q. Keep this series coming quick!

arggghhh was hoping that "pt1" was a lie and it would be a complete story :-)............ great start of course

This was an awesome read. I had to give it an Outstanding Read ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ rating.

I grew-up in the south in the 60’s and early 70’s (Left GA after High School). This tale brought back many bad memories. I was one of the only white boys in a black section of Atlanta, GA so color was not a problem for me. The lady that kept us while my mother worked to provide for our family.

She had 2 son’s who were great people and grew up to strong men and good fathers. They were around the same age as my brother and me. We always did things together including getting into trouble that teenagers did. Nothing malicious are damaging just little things.

One day we got caught and the men that caught us wanted to let me go because I was white, and they were black. They started grab them which would be the wrong thing to do since our friends were just around the corner waiting for us. I stepped in front of my friends and told them to run. The men didn’t know how to react. By the time they started to chase the 2 of them they caught up with the others and they were all waiting around the corner. The subject change from beating to telling them not to come back around there. That was my first major introduction to blatant racism. I met back up with everyone at Grant Park we hung out there and just shot the breeze until time to go home. The story did get back to their mother who tanned our butts. Then when my mother got home, I got it a second time from her. Not just for the act but also for creating an embarrassment to DeeDee May’s family.

Your tale rang so true as to how we treated people who we didn’t know just because they were a different color from us. I am smiling now because you reminded me of how far we have come as a nation. My time in the military gave me an even broader view of the world and the great people in it.

I hope you continue write your tales for us to consume.

Keep Writing

JH4Fun

I have enjoyed all of your stories but why have you gone woke nobody as smart as you knows red birds don’t mate with crows

Oh! This is a good one folks. It's awesome.

Story line was excellent. Really enjoyed it

A different kind of story and I enjoyed it. Can’t wait to see how the story continues.

Q,

Great story. I came back to this after reading the conclusion. While I know it seems to be nitpicking, historical inaccuracies by really good writers bug me more than seeing them is stories that are total crap. If you had shifted the MC's age to 27 or 28 in the first paragraph, or if you had begun the tale in 1973 instead, you'd have been on solid ground. Combat elements of the Marine Corps departed Vietnam in May 1971. They were replaced by the 196th Light Infantry Brigade of the US Army. The last tactical combat unit to leave country was 3rd Battalion, 21st Infantry Regiment in August 1972.

Nevertheless, 5* here and I'll post the same for Ch.02.

Pete

So far so good.

But, what happened to the dog?

Looking forward to ch. 2. Thank you.

So I'm guessing from the main character's descriptions, he's either from Yadkinville or Wilkes, and I'm leaning towards Wilkes- especially with the Merlefest/ Watson references.

I will say, as others have pointed out, there are some inconsistencies with distances and drive times; even when I was a kid growing up in Charlotte a decade after this story took place, it was a helluva hike from the part of town Double Door was in (that made my heart ache) up to Huntersville, where UNCC is- and there was no John Belk Freeway in 1976 to cut through to get over to Elizabeth Ave.

All in all though, I'm really enjoying this, when I usually steer very clear of the LW category.

Surprised there's no comments yet. A very interesting and excellent story. I cannot comment on any authenticity re race relations in the south but it sounds realistic to me. Hope it works out for them. 5⛤

Maybe Angel will get to know what it feels like to be treated as a human being. She may even find that she loves the "white boy". It should be evident what he thinks of her, when told called her his girlfriend and was ready to fight for her. Maybe he'll give her something to remember him by, and she'll settle down and be a wife and mommy, the greatest gift... 10 STARS!!

I've long been a fan of Q's stories, but didn't get much more than half way through this chapter. Are we supposed to like these people? Two dope dealers, one of whom tries to carjack the other at knife point on first meeting? Both of them obnoxious?

I don't want to spend any more time with them. Think I'll go back and reread some of this author's classics.

Double Door, Union Grove, Merlefest... there is a lot of musical name dropping in this story. Of course it lives up to its promise.

I agree with those wondering what happened to the dog.

You always give us a good story, I look forward to seeing where this goes.

Thank you for writing for us! Great story, as always

Thanks for the diversion! I think this tale has real potential, and I love the concept.

I loved the interaction between the characters, after the initial "rocky start." I can almost buy the whole "soldier with PTSD" thread, though he's a bit too self-assured and yet less judgemental and less violent than most would be.

I really liked knowing pretty explicitly what her tits and ass feel like, albeit briefly. I wished I'd heard what her pussy is like, both inside and out, especially when she's cumming, e g. how juicy and how slick vs. how much muscle tone she has in her kegel muscles. And what her blowjob technique is, along with her inclination to use it. He's showing little tendency to eat her pussy, which I think would be great for the connection between them. E.g. if she woke up cumming because he was eating her as she was sleeping, leading to more affection and sweetness of disposition toward him.

As per usual, excellent and somewhat intriguing. I look forward to part 2

Nice story telling .a refreshing change of pace.

Nobody grew serious amounts of weed indoors in 1975 or before, the knowledge to make it worthwhile or profitable did not exist.

It's not legal in Holland and never has been and back then nobody in the country was selling seeds.

Apart from that a decent start.

One more small point.

Cannabis seeds do not smell and dogs cannot detect them

Good story. I new many Nam vets that grew their own weed, it certainly helped relieve the ptsd. Semper Fi, on too the next chapter.

I like this one very much, love your sense of humour.

Great story. Merlefest, Union Grove, UNCC, Doubledoor Inn, coupled with the heat here in Scottsdale, makes me want to go home. I prefer the cooler mountains, but Charlotte would do. You know North Carolina well.