by Nexte100
OhmyGod. So. Fucking. Hot. The way the slut part of her just took over and she became a complete cumslut - this is probably one of the if not the hottest chapters I've ever read on this site. Please, please don't make us wait too long before the next one.
I hope you continue to show her as a complete cumslut for Jonathan in the next chapters too. 5 stars!
Superb writing, it flowed effortlessly look forward to the next installment.
This is without a doubt one of the best stories I have read. I hope there is another part of this story coming soon.
Excellent story. Enjoyed the both pats and their story build up. Looking forward to Part 3.
PLEASE MORE!!!!!!
It is truly a wonderful story. You keep the story flowing with such ease, Your characters are so real you might find them in any high school in the world.
I love the fact that as Mia is helping Jonathon she too is getting over what her ex did to mess her up so bad. Personally I would like to know. Maybe for another chapter
I love how you wrote it that you can take this in so many directions, Isabelle, the ex, the mother, Jonathon going to college, is there a health problem with him. You left us satisfied with the chapter but left the cliff hanger to keep us wanting more, sign of a great writer.
You revealed Mia's cumslut side and that made Jonathon even more comfortable, since Mia has a cum addiction and Jonathon has his heavy duty mass cum production organ they are a couple made in heaven....LOL
once again very much enjoyed it
Thank you
Beautiful story of a sensitive woman helping a young man realize his sexuality and potential.
Please keep up this series!
I really hope you fully utilize Mia's potential to be a cumslut considering Jonathan's ability to produce that much cum. Great story!
Premise still good.
But -- for me at least -- it doesn't really deliver the goods.
Four stars.
Congrats!!! Superbe and interesting writing! Someone who knows how to use language!
A delicious slowburn up to near the end there, but then Mia's true cumslut nature just couldn't be restrained anymore, and she broke free. And it was gloriously erotic. Well done. Hope the next 2 chapters are just as good, if not better.