by eroslit
Emily and Sarah would both look great showing off the baby bump their lovers gave them.
I've been reading incest since 1974 (Mostly Penthouse Forum) and this is one of the best. From experience a son knows when his mother appreciates his taboo attention.
Loved the Story and hope there is a sequel. Also could only picture your face on the daughter.
You covered all the bases ,,, BUT ! It was too rushed. As improbable as the incest genre is it takes time to build. More, but less rushed, more tease and much more detail in the sex. You have the talent, use it...
More PUHLEASE, this was a fun romp,and needs to continue, brother sister, mother daughter, and yes maybe even dad and son.
Great story will there be an after vacation story or one that involves Michael and Emily or some mfm or fmf or even an all out swap and fuck fest
A VERY good story! I hope you will tell us more about the happenings of this family. Please continue writing.
You start off ok, but when you get into the sexual parts of the story it sounds like it's written by an unexperienced person, like an underage teenager. I just wish you would not write like that it makes your story almost unreadable or like the reader would just stop reading. Please think before you write again now, I see why you only have 2345 followers even knowing you have written 122 stories that is 19.2213114754 people per story not very impressive.
Not bad, maybe a little rushed, but not bad.
If a part 2 I hope the focus is more on the brother sister having sex.
And I hope there is straight anal too.
Would love to see the mom or sister (or both) be DP’d.
I love it! Easy 5 stars, needs a part 2, both babes getting pregnant to their new lovers! So beautiful and hot story!
Awesome story. I look forward to a sequel of Michael and Emily. Would love more with Sarah and Emily and even Michael and Daniel, but that's just me.
Very arousing…..5 stars. Love family sex. And like the previous commenter hinted, father / son sex is also hot.
Why not add some more chapters ?
Perfect story. Fantastic characters .
So sad when you don’t continue.
Nicely done, though when did Michael start fucking Sarah in the final scene. The narrative had him getting her off orally, and then all of a sudden he was pulling out of her. ??
Another great story. Very hot. I hope for more chapters. But if not on to the next story 5⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
To @Anonymous (you start off ok....) - Where are YOUR stories? I'd be interested in reading them. I agree with most others about a chapter 2. Good Job.
Loved it !!! Gave it 5 stars for both writing quality and hotness, actually 100 stars !!! Today was my second time reading it. Read it first time a few months ago. Loved all 4 of your characters. Love the way your story's happy ending (the written ending) makes for dreaming of ongoing adventure such an adult consensual polyamorous consanguinamory situation with Emily and Michael consumating their bro-sis love for each other and also various threesome combinations in the family. If not a sequel (which would be nice), happy to dream on. Started re-reading your "Brooke" series of 2016. Will give you feedback on that series later. Read many of your stories years ago. Glad you're back and want to stay.... tommyw091979@gmail.com