All Comments on 'Sweet Little Secrets'

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Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 2 years ago

Very hot! Loved the outcome! Five stars and a favorite point!

DunkirkDunkirkover 2 years ago

Emily and Sarah would both look great showing off the baby bump their lovers gave them.

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 2 years ago
Best whole family sex on Litrotica

I've been reading incest since 1974 (Mostly Penthouse Forum) and this is one of the best. From experience a son knows when his mother appreciates his taboo attention.

dietz100001dietz100001over 2 years ago

Loved the Story and hope there is a sequel. Also could only picture your face on the daughter.

KlitomaticKlitomaticover 2 years ago

You covered all the bases ,,, BUT ! It was too rushed. As improbable as the incest genre is it takes time to build. More, but less rushed, more tease and much more detail in the sex. You have the talent, use it...

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Extremely hot!

perrymichaelsperrymichaelsover 2 years ago

More PUHLEASE, this was a fun romp,and needs to continue, brother sister, mother daughter, and yes maybe even dad and son.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story will there be an after vacation story or one that involves Michael and Emily or some mfm or fmf or even an all out swap and fuck fest

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A VERY good story! I hope you will tell us more about the happenings of this family. Please continue writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

You start off ok, but when you get into the sexual parts of the story it sounds like it's written by an unexperienced person, like an underage teenager. I just wish you would not write like that it makes your story almost unreadable or like the reader would just stop reading. Please think before you write again now, I see why you only have 2345 followers even knowing you have written 122 stories that is 19.2213114754 people per story not very impressive.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

let the twins enjoy each other!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Gave me a hardon

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Not bad, maybe a little rushed, but not bad.

If a part 2 I hope the focus is more on the brother sister having sex.

And I hope there is straight anal too.

Would love to see the mom or sister (or both) be DP’d.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I love it! Easy 5 stars, needs a part 2, both babes getting pregnant to their new lovers! So beautiful and hot story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

All families should be this close.

itsnotjustmeitsnotjustmeover 2 years ago

Awesome story. I look forward to a sequel of Michael and Emily. Would love more with Sarah and Emily and even Michael and Daniel, but that's just me.

bshell47bshell47over 2 years ago
AWESOME STORY

MORE...MORE....

Now Michael and Emily "get it on".

Family fun

NYBossNYBossover 2 years ago

Always a great read

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story. Well written. Sensually taboo material.

GinafrommaineGinafrommaineover 2 years ago

Very arousing…..5 stars. Love family sex. And like the previous commenter hinted, father / son sex is also hot.

rayskibbarayskibbaover 2 years ago

I loved every aspect. I want more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Time for some crazy orgy

bshell47bshell47over 2 years ago
Excellent story

Why not add some more chapters ?

Perfect story. Fantastic characters .

So sad when you don’t continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Better if the girls are each other while son sucked dad!

madtaffcatmadtaffcatover 2 years ago

Sorry I couldn't give you 6 stars -- you deserve it...

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Nicely done, though when did Michael start fucking Sarah in the final scene. The narrative had him getting her off orally, and then all of a sudden he was pulling out of her. ??

Bronco56Bronco56over 2 years ago

Another great story. Very hot. I hope for more chapters. But if not on to the next story 5⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

GrandEagle53GrandEagle53over 2 years ago

To @Anonymous (you start off ok....) - Where are YOUR stories? I'd be interested in reading them. I agree with most others about a chapter 2. Good Job.

LordDeanLordDeanabout 2 years ago

A very well done story. So erotic and arousing. Thank you.

harvey757harvey757about 2 years ago

Great read! Are you back?

bikerboytommybikerboytommyover 1 year ago

Loved it !!! Gave it 5 stars for both writing quality and hotness, actually 100 stars !!! Today was my second time reading it. Read it first time a few months ago. Loved all 4 of your characters. Love the way your story's happy ending (the written ending) makes for dreaming of ongoing adventure such an adult consensual polyamorous consanguinamory situation with Emily and Michael consumating their bro-sis love for each other and also various threesome combinations in the family. If not a sequel (which would be nice), happy to dream on. Started re-reading your "Brooke" series of 2016. Will give you feedback on that series later. Read many of your stories years ago. Glad you're back and want to stay.... tommyw091979@gmail.com

tjreadertjreaderover 1 year ago

I've added this one to my favorites list. Very well done!

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