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by PapaBear76

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rflikeslitrflikeslitover 4 years ago
Happy Christmas

Loved the story..........and especially the comment at the end! ⛄

PapaBear76PapaBear76over 4 years agoAuthor
Author's comment.

I keep finding typos. There are still a few in there. For some reason, I often leave the last letter off a word. Oh, well. I did this one quickly. I wanted it up before the holidays. My best wishes to all. PapaBear76

weckwerthmaweckwerthmaover 4 years ago
To authors comment

I try to roll with the typos as much as I can, but the "you're showing OUT...." took me a bit to figure out. Otherwise great read. 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Too bad it isn't integer

Then a good story wouldn't have been burdened with an insult.

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We write these stories for free and give them to you for free. If you don't like my grammar, sentence structure or slang just go read something else. I do OK without you English teacher "wanna-bees". I welcome all comments, but anonymous hurtful comments will be deleted. So le...