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All Comments on 'Sweet Sexy Lorraine'

by alexcarr

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
It has promise, I think...

There were so many errors that I stopped reading by the third paragraph. An editor or proof reader would help resolve this distraction, allowing the reader to focus on your interesting story line. Nice ideas!

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