All Comments on 'Sweet Submission'

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larrywanderslarrywandersalmost 14 years ago
I liked it

I'd like to see a second chapter and for you to learn the proper use of "your" and "you're". That, with some punctuation where needed, and the story would be perfect. :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Terrible

There is nothing "sweet" about this story. What a selfish bastard, it's his fault not hers for dinner.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

How does she talk when sucking him off?

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