All Comments on 'Sweeter than a Summer's Dream'

I don't know if it is my machine or if it is the site's fault, but I have been unable to rate both this story and your prior one, so add a 5 to each of them for me, please! :-)

Roger

Yes, I noticed that there seems to be a problem with the voting system and I don't think it's only on my stories. :((

[it was a 5]

The problem may be over, your other story is showing a 4.57 and a red H, which means that it has received more than 10 votes to make up this average to get the "Hot" rating.

This one was a great one-pager. You put a lot into that one page, and didn't miss a beat while doing it.

I normally pass on Sci Fi and Fantasy, but I gotta read your "Inside His World"

LitID: Tyro999

email: oj3usmc@yahoo.com

The problem has been resolved and both of my stories can receive votes again. :)

Very erotic but needs more build up rather than jumping right into the sex. That creates more anticipation and eagerness to read on .

Your mastery of word painting is unbelievable. With each sentence you fill in all the lines of your schetch and end up with a beautiful masterpiece. Keep writing... you are GREAT!!

Ace

Had me hard from the start. I need to buy me a cabin!

Now we all want to visit your cabin as you painted a wonderfully visual story. I can close my eyes and see this tale come to life.xxx

Beautiful story, very tastefully done.....I was wrapped up in the plot from the first paragraph.

An enveloping story of arousal and climax. The descriptive imagery produced a beautiful sense of place and drew the reader in to living the fantasy.