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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Did you proofread this?

Do you remember anything about punctuation, spelling, grammar?

TheLastChaosLordTheLastChaosLordalmost 7 years ago
Enjoyable read

Good read and not completely unlikely for his first time. She clearly has more experience than he does.

Hope to see more soon!

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Big fan of porn. Bigger fan of writing. Any and all feedback is always appreciated.

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