- Interracial Love
- Sweetness Ch. 02
- Comments
All Comments on 'Sweetness Ch. 02'
by MabelCinnamon
- 14 Comments
kelleigh0127almost 13 years agoI think so far the story is starting to pick up and I just wished there was a little more. It's so funny when I like something I'm always screaming for more and for it to be longer. I can't wait til' she actually catches up with Kai and the mystery black female...lmao
honeybreealmost 13 years agoMy interest is piqued more and more with this story, this chapter cleared up the confusion from the first chapter, now I don't have that "missing" feeling when reading it. So keep up the good work and can't wait till you update. Though I' am wondering if Kai is a bit unstable sometimes while reading his antics...lol
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoSo Kai is the cosmic glue that keeps the people light hearted. So I'm guessing you are trying to write this story to become some sort of love triangle. Good start try to write longer chapters and please update Parasol.
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Anonymousalmost 13 years agoplease keep going. i'm really interested in kai. he seems like quite the character.
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoOk so far I am loving this story. I can't wait to read more please update soon.
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoI'm liking the direction of the story but I agree it's much too short to really get a read of the characters or the story in general. But, I'm sure whats coming is going to be just as good and on a really positive note it's very well written =) Can't wait to read what you come up with next =)
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoPlease, sir(ma'am),I want some more...lol this story is insanely good and hella funny, looking forward to many more updates and just so you know I aint too proud to beg.
got2luvmelalmost 13 years agow/anon "I like it =)" this is an interesting story so far, but I need a lot more to really get invested in the story.
Anonymousover 12 years agoi've been waiting so long for another story please don't tell me you've stopped writing this one before it even got started, i love the stroy line it's so good! can't wait for the next one please keep going
KittyOh48over 11 years agoPlease finish this story it is good so far!
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoThis is very good and engaging. My attention was obviously captured with part one.
