All Comments on 'Swim Partner'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
You need an Editor

Please get an editor. Your story has grammar and spelling errors.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

English is obviously not the author's native language...

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Unreadable

I could not make it past the 3rf paragraph. Please edit and correct the grammar. It seems like an interesting plot.

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