All Comments on 'Swimmer Taken Ch. 02'

by Elisabeth_Pace

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
loved it!

Love both chapters of this story, i like how you put a bit of emotion into it too. Hope you write more! x

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Great story

this is a great story, I can't wait for the next...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Horrible

I know this site uses a lot of cowincidence but but damn... 'Take me home with you." REALLY i mean come on.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

You need to write another chapter!! That was amazing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
more

i want to see her get revenge on rob

black_maestrablack_maestraover 11 years ago
want help writing it? LOL

very good story. I was already thinking she probably liked Tony anyway. Good ending.

ChrisTor22ChrisTor22over 9 years ago
Lucky Tony...what about Rob??

Pretty calm after having been raped twice and having her mouth well-used...no??

Where did you go?? Married so couldn't write, but still fantasizing about this sort of scene? Do you swim and wish/wonder about reality biting your sweet ass, Elisabeth?? LOL

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

PLEASE, WE NEED CUMNINATION TO THIS SEXY TALE. CAN YOU FINISH IT IN ONE MORE CHAPTER, OR DO YOU NEED MORE? IF YOU NEED MORE, THEN TAKE WHAT YOU NEED, BUT PLEASE LET US KNOW HOW THIS TALE ENDS!!!!!! YOMEYO

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