All Comments on 'Swimming with My Cousin'

Would like a part two

Please dont leave us hanging. This is a hot story that I hope will lead to these two falling for each other, moving in together, getting married if their state allows and making babies.

Straight in? No manners - and of course really not possible, particularly with any natural lube being dispersed by the pool water.

More pls

I really liked this and would definitely want this to continue, keep up the great work!

Quite a few disparities with situations seemingly forgotten before the proverbial ink was dry. The most glaring being her pushed onto the side of the pool then spread her legs open under the water ? ? ? Which is it.

There was an earlier similar, but different, situation.

Your enthusiasm for the subject and in the pool is appreciated but please, watch the continuity of the situation you have and that which follows.

This could have been a lot better, and I hope the following chapters will be.

Please give us more.

All characters in sexual situations are 18 years of age and older.

Really? How? When you describe her you say she is "a couple years younger", and that they are both in their teens.

Even if he is 19, she would be 17 or less.

Do you enjoy writing kiddie porn, you fucking child molesting pervert?

Give sexy Mark a bit of sexy chest hair for his masculine and muscular chest -- just enough for Samantha to see and caress.

Ignore the trolls. I turned comments off for my submissions. These assholes are just looking to criticise.

A nice start to what could become a nice little series.

A nice way to get over the problem that someone else was overly critical of is to say as he pushed her to the side of the pool she lifted her head and looked lustfully into his eyes and her body started to slide up the side of the pool as he lustfully opened her legs and pushing her back firmly against the wall of the pool enabling him to line uher love tunnel ready to receive his now very firm member. See what you think but there will always be those who think it’s clever to pull apart other peoples hard work it’s probably just jealousy as does who can’t criticise

Really good start to what could be a nice little series

Please write more!

Young love

With hormones racing, skimpy suits enticing, nature takes its course.

Coming of Age

Glances exchanging

Hormones raging,

Bodies engaging.

Pretty quick fuck...

Fun but c'mon....