All Comments on 'Swinging with the Folks'
by Purechicanery
- 12 Comments
rodav8 months agoAbsolutely exciting. I like the way you don’t make the actual sex too long to be repetitive that will end up to become boring. The dialogue is more interesting and exciting.
Can’t wait for the next chapter.
Purechicanery8 months agoAuthorI've noticed both the comments so far are hoping for a continuation of this story. There's not going to be any, but perhaps the fact that this appears to be an expectation among some means it is worthwhile that I explain a little bit of my method/intent.
Or maybe I just want an excuse to ramble.
There are two things at play here; my preferences regarding fiction, and my preferences specifically regarding incestuous smut.
First thing I'll mention is that my preference is for flash fiction. Short stories with, usually, one central event. So my stories will generally be, introduce characters and the premise, find a resolution, the end. More or less. I've no interest in particularly long stories, or, for the most part, multiple vignettes involving the same characters.
Regarding incestuous smut, what specifically interests me is the 'forbidden' nature of the act. My ideal is two or more characters who 'would never' because that would be (scandalous, wrong, unthinkable, insert your favourite adjective) and then as a result of some contrived situation go on to do what they would previously have thought they would never do. I am, for the most part, disinterested in continuation after that initial taboo is overcome, unless there's a new taboo to contend with.
In this particular story, for example, I have no real interest in writing a scene where Felix has sex with his mother in front of his girlfriend, or they have a threesome, or whatever else you want to imagine might happen here. The implication that it will likely happen in the future is more interesting to me, as it is an indicator of Felix's mindset following his encounter with his mother; that, messed up as it was, he's totally hoping to keep doing it.
Anonymous8 months agoLove the story. Nice and sweet. But if you ever decide in the future to add a second chapter. It will be exceptional like this one.
