All Comments on 'Swipe Right Ch. 01'

Great story…. You have talent fren…. Can’t wait for the rest

I love it!

Good start. Looking forward to reading more.

" get a little long" that's a certainty. However, it reads very well without stubbles. Sex in the dorm room got a bit time fumbled as thought one moment it is in the present and the next the past, then the present and back to the past. I will watch for the next chapter as this story sounds like a great tale in the making. Thanks for the efforts.

Absolutely perfect. Can’t wait for the next part

Good start so far, please ask her instead of wondering where they stand in her mind and take it from there.

Enjoyed the story. 4*. The chat between the two took on a gradual openness which enhanced the flow of the story. How did the sister ever see a birthmark on his hip? One would guess that a birthmark like that would be hidden by underwear or shorts. First person POV is limiting since the sisters reasons for coming on to her brother would be quite interesting. Looking forward to part two.

That was HOT!!.....Can't wait for the continuation.

Loved it can't wait for the second part.

Good characters - nice slow burn. More please.

The dialogue is about 400% too trite, contrived, all while the female dialogue reads as if it came from a male brain, mostly like a virgin one.

Looking forward to their sexond date. 😈

Awesome start. Can the ending be as good?

Awesome story. Well done!

Great story love the way it started can't wait for chapter two.

Great build up. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Wow write quick I can’t wait for the next chapter

Get to the point 3 pages of bla bla bla

please continue

Fantastic, absolutely loved the way you built the story and the suspense. So very hot and I definitely want more.

Hope mother gets in on the action also!

Well done. Interesting plot building slowly to the date. Good inner dialogue, Characters, well-fined and believable.

An enjoyable ending which leads to. . .

Very well done, great build up to what is to come. This has the makings of a hot and powerful climax, just please don't rush it into a wham-bam-thank you ma'am kind of finish. This story could have a wonderful, and sexy happy ending. Looking forward to it.

Hate cliffhangers

I'm hoping that in part two that you have Megan reveal more about how she became okay with dating her brother. I get it that she already said that she was attached emotionally and didn't stop what was going on even though she figured out his identity. But he never indicated that there was a pause in their sexting messages. Surely she would have taken a moment to think about continuing down the path that they were on. 4/5 even though you stated up front about pushing the limits on believable scenarios.

Good story. Try to watch your tenses. When you’re telling something that happens in the past you flip from present to past and back constantly. It’s hard to read.

Otherwise, I’m looking forward to part two

Part 2 pls

hot start, cant wait for more....

Way too much of a cliffhanger. He's either in or out, not a long or difficult decision.