by Beatnic_jazzman
I enjoy your story but have to see if by "blue saloon" or "blue salon", do you mean "blue sedan"?
Yes sorry, I made a note on the last episode, I'm using British English, and salon was a miss-spelling that didn't get caught.
I perhaps might take this opportunity of asking if anyone whats to edit my work, stop errors like this sneaking through.
...just for the opportunity to see the stuff first (chuckle)!