by Beatnic_jazzman
I'd like to see how the rest of this goes. Let me know when you have another chapter. Very discriptive. I feel like I know the characters pretty well, and I felt his sorrow after her confiding in him. Excellent.
I really like the premise behind this. It's interesting, relatively believable, and not too cliche. I hope you continue this sooner rather than later.
I don't think I've read a story involving a sybian before, but they are pretty cool machines. Great stuff!
Interesting--a Sybian which can be used in several different positions. What a concept! Ms Saffron definitely knows what she wants, and I have a feeling Frank is going to give it to her.
A size twenty is no where near being as big as lady you described in the beginning. Try a size 28.
...I love how you build a "truth" into your stories. This is really a grand beginning. I'm looking forward to the rest.
Before they gave up the Armoury, Kink, Inc. made some videos with Sybians turned on their nose.