All Comments on 'Sybian Engineer 01'

by Beatnic_jazzman

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StrawberryJonesStrawberryJonesover 12 years ago
Very good start

I'd like to see how the rest of this goes. Let me know when you have another chapter. Very discriptive. I feel like I know the characters pretty well, and I felt his sorrow after her confiding in him. Excellent.

Roge472xalRoge472xalover 12 years ago
I loved it

And looking forwards to your next! :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Nice story!

I really like the premise behind this. It's interesting, relatively believable, and not too cliche. I hope you continue this sooner rather than later.

I don't think I've read a story involving a sybian before, but they are pretty cool machines. Great stuff!

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassover 12 years ago
Great start

Interesting--a Sybian which can be used in several different positions. What a concept! Ms Saffron definitely knows what she wants, and I have a feeling Frank is going to give it to her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
size 20?

A size twenty is no where near being as big as lady you described in the beginning. Try a size 28.

DawnJDawnJover 11 years ago
Honestly...

...I love how you build a "truth" into your stories. This is really a grand beginning. I'm looking forward to the rest.

DawnJDawnJover 11 years ago
To Anonymous

I'm a size 20...it's big enough, believe me. :)

maddictmaddictover 9 years ago

Go round ??? Love your english. Yes your language, similar to american,

OlFrog14xOlFrog14xover 2 years ago

Before they gave up the Armoury, Kink, Inc. made some videos with Sybians turned on their nose.

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