All Comments on 'Sylvia's Mom Pt. 02'

by OG4U

Sort by:
  • 5 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Hello

I am getting to setup Kodi on my fire stick

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Too much too soon.

I am a three time married man who cannot stand to see a woman abased or degraded in any way and am more used to seeing them as cherished and equal partners in life. I am sorry that I cannot continue reading your story. But that is my problem, not yours. As a person that has had many good and bad relationships, including some inter generational including threesomes with mother in laws and wife, this goes against all I have strived for and learned in my 63 years. Sorry that I cannot Vote on this story. Good luck in your future attempts.

Aussie1951Aussie1951over 6 years ago
Overlooking the few errors

Still a bloody good storyline.. 5 stars

mark73107mark73107about 6 years ago
Nice

Loved it. Very hot and sensual.

If you ever decide to have someone edit your stories

I will be more than happy to help you.

Gym52Gym527 months ago

A proofreader and an editor would take your work from good to excellent, your imagination is running four minute miles, unfortunately your fingers are taking about six to cover the same distance.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous