All Comments on 'Sylvia's Mom Pt. 14'

I have enjoyed your story and hope you continue with it.

I have loved all of your series so far and hope more many more chapters to all of them.

you have a really good story going keep it coming . you have 4 to 5 ladies want to become his sex slaves and more , and a few others maybe in the future ?

I loved this series

~toy~

Please keep your story going. I can't wait to read more chapter's in this story. Keep them coming.

Very good story so far. please keep up with your good word.

Are you going to continue this story? I REALLY hope you do and not be like so many writers on this site who leave their stories half ass. I understand that being a writer is sometimes trying but please keep this going.

TK

More please it's the best i have read .

I have been hoping to read more of him with Sylvia it's almost as if she has been abandoned, it would be good for the story if they get married and she is the first to have children. Hope it continues.

This was a good story. Please continue with the series.

continue the story it was getting good start this girls training to be his slave , marry Sylvia's mom and make her his slave to plus there are others that want to be his slave . DON'T let the story die at this point continue it . PLEASE !

This was just getting better and then stops, please continue

DON'T let the story die at this point continue it . PLEASE Story just becoming better need more chapter

This is a great story and it canonly get better from here. I also think Sylvia’s father and his master shouldcome into it, perhaps to do as Sylvia’s father’s master said about making Sheila and Sylvia his?

THIS IS AN AWESOME STORY. WHY DID U NOT FINISH IT. OR DID I MISS SOMETHING.

I think you should continue the story.

Would be great if this story ever got finished, but I highly doubt it will, it doesn’t look like the author has been online here in 3 years.

This great work has followed your usual template, a brilliant introduction to the premise and the characteristics of the principals, you then appear to enjoy taking your characters through a number of convoluted adventures, you then stop as it you are unable to let the characters go.

The later chapters of this story appear to have been properly proofread and edited whether this is what has happened or you have been more diligent in your work ethic I do not know, but it has been easier to read.