All Comments on 'Symphony Sluts'

Peeking under her skirt, you'd confront her white cotton "underpants"

I am glad she turned out liking her hung sons cock fucking her ass

Highly unlikely the first wife sent an email to breakup.. If she worked for Pan Am, they stopped flying in 1971, 5 weeks after the first email was sent. Given that most people had never seen a computer, much less own one, it's hard to imagine how either had access to email.

As far as the rest of the story, the scene with mother & son was a good one.

Your writing style is as dry as the desert. Any first grader could were like that. Put some feeling into your writing.

Your description of pubic hair on women killed it for me. I couldn’t help but laugh as I imagined Cousin It living between her legs. After that, the errors became more frequent and I stopped reading. I’m not asking for perfection, because I make mistakes too, but misspelling the name of one of your main characters is difficult to get past.

Please stop, your writing is weak!!!!!!!!

Too much anal for my interests. Sorry.

I am more interested in the protagonist hooking up with the females in the symphony.....and perhaps even the conductor. Not a fan of the current story line. This must be your first attempt at writing.

Too much chopping and changing scenes. Not sure where I was or if I missed something with the way the story was flowing. Thanks though!

Your writing was at best sporadic and unconnected, but more like a twelve year old writing whatever pops into his mind during a masturbation session.

Please don't ever "write" again.