All Comments on 'Synecdoche'

by thezinger

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litereader54litereader54about 13 years ago
Very Nice

Very well written piece. Sounds like you've done some research yourself on those very volumes. Keep it up. So much of this stuff is hack-work crap written by illiterates.

papagrizpapagrizabout 13 years ago
VERY ENJOYABLE READ

A well written story to be sure even if the literature was way over my head. Please bring us more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Lovely

A library fantasy for people that have actually seen the inside of one. What a concept!

estragonestragonabout 13 years ago
Zinger, Really Good Story

Really fine writing, not one single quibble. More!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Excellent!

Thank You!

You write a fine story that includes the sensitivity and 'build up' that perhaps defines the difference between porn and literature.

Please continue to share your work with us. js

hejohejoalmost 13 years ago
wow

What a way with words!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Write on Maczinger

write on for "them's that read."

Also I love the sound of "Adriana" as in "Ah....Adriana!"

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationover 10 years ago
Absolutely

stunning! I've not read all the quoted works you've included here, but this was a fantastically erotic story. You brought to bear the greatest sex organ in the human body, the mind, and mixed it with beautiful, loving, passion. Realllly well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Excellent library erotica

Great story about two young people looking for literature to light their way . Excellent .

Well done

thezingerthezingerover 8 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

I appreciate the positive feedback!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

BEAUTIFUL !!!

HansiMaierHansiMaier3 months ago

What a wonderful story.

thezingerthezingerabout 1 month agoAuthor

HansiMaier, thank you!

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