by Montgomery Quinn
Damn it you hooked me so fast I didn’t even realize this was a two page lead into nothing!!! 5 ugly stars for a short chapter.... I had just finished Hell... and was expecting something similar. Ugh!
Great plot potential & story -- it's begs for more, just as all us readers should.
Would love to see more of this story. As well as hell and a return of rose would be spectacular. Though I'm excited to see more of kkr and b&b as well.
Good story keep it going it reminds me of an anime girls un panzer one of my favorite
I enjoyed this story more than I thought I would. There were a few places where word selection could have been better, but still, the ideas got through. The transition between her father's death and events afterward could have been spelled out in terms of her activities before she was 'discovered' ten years later by the other women; even this is a minor point. Was she out of school and into college at this point? A few details like this would have given this character more depth.
Still a full five from me.
I wonder how the Israeli female tank crews would like this story? Great job, just a few minor things caught my eye in terms of wording and such.
Wow! As a WoT player, thus strikes major chords with me. MORE! MUCH MORE! :-) 5*!
I liked the story and the characters. I would love it if you wrote another chapter. Thanks
Please continue, Love the viewpoint of this story, definitely looking forward to reading more of this.
Pleased at your gleeful violation of conventional roles.
Tried to imagine sex in a tank, but.....
I was not expecting it to end after two pages. I would rather read part 2 of Hell, but I like this one, too.
If you don't make this a series your missing a Great opportunity . With your natural story telling ability this will make (my favorite lost series ROSE) a really really top shelf series .
Thanks for the read 5*'s just so you know
txcracker
Great Story
Loved the storyline and it was so very touching too. A definite 5!
Definitely a good start to a new world. Characters have just enough depth to them in this short intro to be real, while still leaving plenty of room for growth and expansion.
Please continue with this storyline. It appears that there are many of us who would like to see where this goes.
How come we can not come up with this in real life? It would beat football anyday.
Love it and can’t wait for more. I can tell this is going to be good and one to look forward to.
This kinda make me think of a more realistic story of the anime “Girls und Panzer” there’s a movie on Netflix too “Girls und Panzer der Film” It was good.
But if you want to watch a realistic good tank movie, hop on Amazon Prime and search “T-34” Director: Aleksey Sidorov. ‘In 1944, a courageous group of Russian soldiers manage to escape from German captivity in a half-destroyed, legendary T-34 tank.’ Love the slow-mo of the shots in the movie, it was well made.
Again can’t wait for more and keep up the good work. “Panzer For”
I suspect it’s easier to film football, as it’s not over such spread out distances
But your comment also reminded me that back in the 90s there were a few places with battle tech mech simulators. They’d probably be easier to run these days as you don’t need multiple computers to run each one, even with the better monitors