by Tallnhard1
I really like your story, Then I looked and it was brand new , so please part 2.Very realistic as if you lived it.
Good job.
Loved the story and to me it seemed well written and I could visualise the characters. . More please 🙏
OMG , I have to start dressing up and hitting the bars, stretched my panties
OMG i LOVED this story. Keep them coming. The detail and realism were so perfect.
Loved it, @TallnHard1! Luca & Ava make a great couple and the dynamics between Jamie and Ava are really fun. Not to mention, the sex was awesome.
Would love to see more chapters. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
This is by far the best CD story I've ever read. Not one line of unrealistic crap, not a hint of poorly described detail. Best of all? Not one "bussy" or cringe af "anus". Thanks so much for a well written and realistic tale.
Excellent. Pacing was perfect (if you know what I mean ;) ). I'll read this again, and again
Excellent
Very well written, characters very well devolped
Throughly enjoyed it.
Keep writing Tall and Hard 1
Nice to read a story that's gentle and caring. I loved the banter between 'Ava' and Jamie, too.
Would love to hear how Ava evolves.