by hentaigirl9
Your clear prose and precise imagery make for a tantalizing story.
Also, good use of semicolons.
Bring on some more. Second helpings or another course. You tell a good short story.
I am not accustomed to this level of writing in this venue. I'll look for more of yours, keep 'em cuming!
Bill
Tantalizing and so erotic, classy writing like a light sexy perfume on a vixen...!