All Comments on 'Table for Two'

by hentaigirl9

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danlydanlyalmost 18 years ago
Excellent

Your clear prose and precise imagery make for a tantalizing story.

Also, good use of semicolons.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
It was so brief.

Bring on some more. Second helpings or another course. You tell a good short story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
a very sophisticated story

I am not accustomed to this level of writing in this venue. I'll look for more of yours, keep 'em cuming!

Bill

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Tantalizing and so erotic, classy writing like a light sexy perfume on a vixen...!

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