All Comments on 'Table Talk'

Excellent! Maybe you'll decide to continue with these two by adding additional chapters later. 5/5

They are a fun couple!

5

This reads so familiar!!

Nice

his is really charming. Loved how the MCs start to play off each other as their attachment grows

Wonderful, loved the humour and teasing in it. Sex that was giving to each other.

Very enjoyable read. Good pace and characters. It allows me to remember a time in my past. Now I need to explore your other works.

A romance story with both a pleasant plot and good character development. A touch of sex and good construction and...what more can you ask. A very pleasant read indeed. 5*

A great great story....

The AF prank was fairly lame. I was hoping for something more humorous like she was an author also and recognized him from the forum or something along those lines. 4*

A most delightful and realistic story. I look forward to reading more of your writings.

Fun! Well-written. Predictable but light fun. Decent back stories are mostly hinted at. Great character development and good details of locale, ambience and excellent pacing. And it is a rare delight to not stumble on sloppy typos or poor editing/proofreading. Thank you and keep on keeping on.

Please consider writing more... and give sexy Marc a spread of sexy chest hair for his masculine chest! They seem real catches fore each other! Bravo!

A nice romance that builds with teasing and banter. An easy five stars even without the April Fools connection.

I thoroughly enjoyed this. 5 stars

A lovely story and well written. Two interesting characters who spark off each other in a very natural way - you really made them come alive. Thank you for sharing

Lovely nice moving story. Look forward to more! 5 stars.

Sweet, fun, and sexy. I think the author put in the effort too. 5*

The botany part of your lovely story reminded me of Aldo Leopold's 'A Sand County Almanak'. From a nature lover that is high praise!

I enjoyed reading this story. Your characters are interesting and likable, but I feel they could have some more depth. The plot seems linear and predictable, with no tension, only a steady progression. The April Fool’s line seemed a bit anticlimactic to me.

For all my criticism, you write well. Your story is clean and easy to read, and the dialogue feels natural. I appreciate your rigorous editing that shows your respect for the reader.

Thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work.

Very nice indeed, a story as multilayered as its characters. While Marc's previous relationship troubles are only hinted at (like the whiny, entitled GF in his story), the personal growth of both Emmy and Marc to find their new path together is evident. I am amazed at all the little details of the botany outing, the date preparation, etc. Cecilia's character is a hoot, brash, mouthy, yet also a bit of a muse for Emmy. An easy 5 stars.

Sweet with a dose of hot. Very relatable characters. 5*

I wish I could give more than 5 stars. It's well-written and has a great story to support the sexy part. Thank you!

No-brainer five stars. Beautiful story, expertly written. Love Emmy. Great dialogue between the two. You definitely won a follow from me.

Great slow burner! Loved reading it.