All Comments on 'Taboo Special Delivery'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Good start.

Very enjoyable can't wait to read the next part.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
cheating

don't like all the cheating why couldn't they both get divorced and live together instead.

RaphaelPalinskiRaphaelPalinskiover 12 years ago
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How the HELL would you explain the concept of leaving your husband for your brother, or your wife for your sister. Seems hard, huh.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
not good

only half a story and the cheating killed it they need to be together. as to it being hard if they divorced their spouses NO it wouldn't be hard they have different last names and most states don't require blood tests before getting married. it would be easy they both get divorced and move to another state and get married SIMPLE AS PIE. this was a crappy way to end the story write another chapter and have them stay together other wise you wasted our time and yours.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
CHAPTER 3

CHAPTER 3

Lindy1969kLindy1969kover 5 years ago

Amazing story, I hope you continue it!

Rancher46Rancher46about 2 years ago

Well, start an amazing story and then this unfinished story is disappointing, readers have waited over 10 year and no chapter 2 and probably there is not a snowball's chance in hell of a conclusion. Bummer 3/5

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