by J_Kincaid
I loved this story & was not expecting the ending, I will be reading more from you.
OT O! We have entered into the twilight zone! It is a very nice twilight zone, and just like the tv show- doooo dodoooo doe - a very unexpected one it was. I will have see what else you have taken us into.
The Eagle flys
Fun story, but they just started fooling around out of nowhere. I was hoping she'd have to do some pant measurements or something that caused more teasing...maybe she couldn't even get a proper measurement with his erection poking out of his pants...something. Instead he got hard and she said she wanted suck his cock. Too direct, unrealistic and takes you out of the moment.
Interesting ending though.
What a piece of literature - very well written, very hot, very scary too! Will check out your other stories immediately.