All Comments on 'Take Me Away Ch. 02'

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I know what I know, but I'll be damned if I'm not wishing he's got a re-intro somewhere down the line cause he's hot, and funny and perfect. Yummy pirate! I was laughing my ass off at Tubby Taxguy. He has to be the unsexiest villian to date. Even the demons were worded with some latient sexuality to me. I can't find anything sexy here hough. Ouch!