All Comments on 'Take Me, Tom Pt. 41-45'

Wow wow! What a turn of events. I guess we know why jack wanted chrissie to remortgage the house. And emily its about time tom came around and accepted her and chrissie need eachother and he the the lucky bastard to have two hotties who wantbto be with him.

The fact emily comes to help with the kids during the tragic time. She fitd into this family and belongs.

Awesome turn of events!

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Thank You Boo! I was hoping they would try a throuple.

Fantastic chapter. And like topoftheham said thank you.

Their back home and the exhusband is out of the picture and emily is finally joining the couple.

I cant wait to see the adventures you dream up for the 3 of them.

This is awesome. Love the idea of a 3 way relationship.

10 stars if i could but since i cant you get 5/5

Nice move on Jack. I had questioned his role in my comments to your last posting. Of anyone, he could have blown up their relationship and what they want to do. His death and circumstance fit the storyline perfectly and set up Tom to be the new father. I am warming to Emily being part of their family, but not sure I'm all the way there yet. LOL! Once criticism, this post was particularly bad about bouncing around who was speaking/thinking in first person. As you don't make obvious breaks like some writers on the site do, you need to make it very clear who's narrating. 5*

I think that three can merge as one. They all love one another, and it isn't just sex. Speaking as a man who has been in a twenty-year relationship with my older sister I'm fairly sure that if she had the relationship that Chrissie has with Em....with another woman I would be open to being in a relationship with two women.