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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
ver very good

very very good. more hermione stories please!!!!

FaeryRaeFaeryRaeover 19 years ago
awesome job

awesome story! keep them coming. love these hermione stories so much!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
wonderous

more, More, MORE!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Great!

we want more!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
amazing

loved the story, woulda been nice to make it a five some with harry and ron

siramimucsiramimucabout 16 years ago
oh yeah

great story, but for one flaw that simply relates to the books:

Dumbledore shouldn't be there. :-P

other than that, thumbs up.

orgasmic_writingsorgasmic_writingsover 15 years ago
No Dumbledore

I didn't like Dumbledore's involvement. I prefer people the same sort of age, but thats just my preference. Apart from that I loved it. Putting a realistic swing on Harry and Ron's dialogue was cool.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
great job

great story, please keep the hermione stories cumming

bgsmrtassbgsmrtassover 13 years ago

very nice would love to read more

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

more please!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Read the Books!

You do know that Dumbledore is gay, right?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
amazing

great job, keep it coming

CrazyDaveTrucker60CrazyDaveTrucker60over 1 year ago

Name of the story: Hermione and the Golden Shaft

AnonymousAnonymous26 days ago

Why didn’t either of them cum all over her cute face?

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