All Comments on 'Taken Advantage if Whilst Being Ill'

by BobRiley

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
I'm going to....

Stay totally limp. That was like the 'Sesame Street' of non-con.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Typo in title

I wasn't expecting much after the title looks like it got badly Auto-corrected, is it too late for you to fix this?! Then I read the story and actually didn't mind it. Wasn't the kind of quality that week's of effort might have given, but it was to the point and believable. I don't normally comment on such things but since the last person mentioned 'limp', I'll admit you get credit for at least having me hard by the time the ex started fingering her. The sex scene wasn't long enough to get more out of me than that. And puking isn't one of my turn ons, but it added to realism and put the woman in the position you wanted her in.

If you want a better response from the community maybe for your next one spend longer writing your next story with more build up, details and proof reading.

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