All Comments on 'Taken Advantage of by My New Dad'

Not good. Not cool. That's just bullying.

I'm so embarrassed. Both of my stories got strongly negative feedback. My first story was rejected altogether. These were real experiences that I had. At first they were harsh but they make me cum constantly now... I was going to write an entire 'Taken Advantage of' series. Maybe I really am a freak. I'll think about asking the moderators to take it down. Thanks anyway for reading.

It's a bold and kinky set up to be sure, but you've already got it started. One piece of negative feedback can hardly be generalized into broad condemnation. Shake it off and follow your "calling".

Even if it wasn't my cup of tea, I still found your narrator's energetic and willing complicity in the events kind of intriguing. Just assume you have an audience and write to them.

Hot! I like where this is going. You could maybe elaborate more on each character and their development. Making each story longer. But I found it arousing!

Excellent. Purely excellent

This has made me so hard...I need a little sissy slut to fuck

i love a good forced sex story.

i trembled at the part about your bloody ass and your cries.

i cum when a sissy screams

much love, lynette

Writing about an experience like that gets it out in the open. It's a rough way to have your first anal fuck. I had a similar experience after being picked up by an older man at a movie theater matinee one summer. We ended up in his hotel room (he was on vacation) and he became my painful first. He also got in my head and I visited everyday until he went back home. We survived it and are hopefully better for it. ❤️

that was great please write more

Great story! My high school teacher groomed me when I was 14 for a year, teasing me, leading me, making me want it. And when he finally fucked me, I was begging for it. He took his time, fucking me gently and making my cock cum without touching it. And by the time he came, he had me begging for him to dump his load in my ass