All Comments on 'Taken and Broken Ch. 01'

I like your story hope you have her fight back cause seems like shes been in pain already and have him fall for her 1st cause you don't see that to often he can still be a Dom and her a sub and hope hes not to bad

Can't wait to see more.

Great beginning. Please continue.

Appreciate the comments guys. I'll be uploading chapter 2 today and am almost done with chapter 3. Keep it up with the input, good or bad. It really helps!

Peace,

Imon

Slap his face. Drive your fist into his throat. Do SOMETHING! UGH!

Ooooh, I just LOVE that cross! It enforces such an advantageous positioning of the body. A female doesn't do it for me though, but a male - there are few bodytraps that can do for the male body what that cross does. Beautiful.

Interesting personality-sketches you've got going in the background. Hopefully somebody breaks somebody's heart here and I hope it's the aggressor's. Sorry, I always root for the woman. Revenge-fantasies are so much fun.

Thanx for the story.

Evebroughtanaxthistime

I love your comments! I'm definitely taking something from everyone's input, trying to mold it into each chapter I write. This is a bit of a test fic for me and I'm glad everyone's enjoying it to some degree. The second part is up and the third is on it's way. Keep it up with the feedback!