All Comments on 'Taken at the Toy Store'

Great start!

i could be that it happens to be a fantasy of mine and that i'm very similar to this guy. i'm a little bigger than you wrote him, but i'm bi, with some experience. or it could also be that it was just written well. i look forward to more from you.

You had everything you needed but the real embellishing details. Add some dialogue and slutty talk, and then this would be one for the record books

I`d give this a 200 rating!! I fuckin LOVED it!! This has been a fantasy of mine forever!! To be gangbanged for hours, to have cocks of all shapes and sizes RAMMED into my throbbing asshole!! To be filled with cum to overflowing!! Even have 2 cocks in me at once!! I`d even try a fist if they wanted!! I would give anything to live out this story!! If anyone is looking for a gangbang loving cum slut sign me up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Who wants some ass!!!!!!!!!!

omg dude thats one of the best stories Ive read on literotica, but i do agree revamp it add more detail and so dirty talk and you got gold medal porn story, I came so hard I almost passed out, I wanna see a sequal,maybe he comes back friday...=P

One word, "Great". I was gang banged once close to what you wrote about. Never had anything like it ever happen again. Still looking.

wut the title said

amazing, has always kind of been a fantasy of mine. except ive always wanted to be one of the guys on the giving end of the gangbang, not the recieving. but i agree with the rest, dirty talk is your best friend, use it. and you will be my hero

your the envy of many guys, truly a great story, wish it were me

fucking great wish it was my arsehole and mouth .to be used like that would be heaven .

What a lucky guy.....

Fuck me like that any day

So close to my personal fantasy & more !!!

Uhhhhhhhh.. my cock is sore after reading this gem! WOW! What a dream come true.

I would like that fun

This was a fun and somewhat sensual story, obviously written as a fantasy for the author and not at all realistic. If I was there I would be asking who and how many times a "dirty" dick had cum in that ass. I'm as crazed as the next guy, but I don't have a death wish. No thanks.

Take me with you next time,please...

Hi, so I copied this on wattpad, gave you all the credit. If that wasn't ok please let me know and I will take it down instantly. You can find me on wattpad by the username @ForgottenCharm

I'd give anything to experience a night like the one in this story. Thanks so much for making me horny as hell. I've never been satiated but believe if I had experienced a night like the one in this story I might finally have felt fully satisfied. More like this please.

after thoroughly enjoying this story, i am inspired to post an experience of my own......at a bathhouse----coming soon

I wish that was me covered in cum. I’m always willing to take as many cocks that are available.