All Comments on 'Taken by a Stripper Pt. 03'

Another 5 star chapter. I am excited to read how this goes.

I love where this is going. I had a relationship with a stripper, and we were together for 7 years while she worked. Then she retired, and we are still together today. I hope these two have a similar future.

Ahh, a great love story. The tormented hot girl and the knight in shining armor.

All talk about briefs and underwear is a bit disturbing. I know it's your "thing" but maybe tone it down a bit.

Great stuff all together, please keep it going!

The endless teasing and good scenario!!!

Keep up the good work!!!!

Not much plot progression in this one. So many times of the same basic thing at the club struggles to keep me engaged. 4.3*

I partially disagree with Demosthenes.

Yes, there is a slowdown, but also progression.

I'm hoping this slowdown is a deliberate break before more tightly spaced events.

Too uniformly paced, even when fast-paced, stories become monotonous.

The scenes at the club have (hopefully) important bits of progression.

But they are somewhat samy and feel rather repetitive to read.

Unfortunately I'm not a writer and don't have a good idea on how to make them more interesting reading without losing them, or messing with the pacing by having too much happen.