by johnjeff
A little more detail would have improved a decent first story. Having said that, it had me hard and stroking. Looking forward to more of your fantasies.
Don't stop My Stevens - ?
So I can see you face - Italian or English?
Penis explored my virgin bowls - ?
Rapping my lips around - ?
Rapped my hand around my weeping cock - ?
I took his penis and pointed in directly inside me and waiting for the pain - huh?
looking a adorable a possible - ?
Use quotation marks instead of apostrophies for dialogue.
Proofread. Read it aloud to yourself before submitting. The story isn't bad, even if it is a bit abrupt.
I got picked up one night by a TV man she (He) looked lovely and I was expecting a nice cunt to fill but in the hotel room I found out she was a he I soon had his cock in my arse (first time) and also I got my cock in his arse also a first time. Then we sucked each other off to a lovely tasty cum..
What do I say "Wow lovely and looking for more."
I would love to be taken the same way, I am much older but I would enjoy it all , my email pwvrph46@comcast.net if any response