All Comments on 'Taken By My Teacher'

by johnjeff

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yorkie54yorkie54about 14 years ago
NOT BAD

A little more detail would have improved a decent first story. Having said that, it had me hard and stroking. Looking forward to more of your fantasies.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
"Don't stop My Stevens" raises questions

Don't stop My Stevens - ?

So I can see you face - Italian or English?

Penis explored my virgin bowls - ?

Rapping my lips around - ?

Rapped my hand around my weeping cock - ?

I took his penis and pointed in directly inside me and waiting for the pain - huh?

looking a adorable a possible - ?

Use quotation marks instead of apostrophies for dialogue.

Proofread. Read it aloud to yourself before submitting. The story isn't bad, even if it is a bit abrupt.

mstrb77mstrb77almost 14 years ago
Been there----loved it.

I got picked up one night by a TV man she (He) looked lovely and I was expecting a nice cunt to fill but in the hotel room I found out she was a he I soon had his cock in my arse (first time) and also I got my cock in his arse also a first time. Then we sucked each other off to a lovely tasty cum..

What do I say "Wow lovely and looking for more."

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Te same way

I would love to be taken the same way, I am much older but I would enjoy it all , my email pwvrph46@comcast.net if any response

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