All Comments on 'Taken Ch. 01'

I loved it well writen, great theme. I look forward to more stories.

It was a well-written story, though not as "dirty" as i'd like.. I usually go to literotica.com when i wanna read a "whack-off" story, but this one was interesting enough to read all the way through, though not wack-off worthy lol.. I will read any additional submissions to this story, keep up the great writing skills.

Great story, well written, but I would like more..

This is a wonderful story, very well written, The characters are great,

great new plot I would like to request further chapters in this story, maybe how georgia and sandy a few weeks later, or maybe a side story of one of the other capptives.

if your raTING HAD GONE AS FAR AS A 10 YOU WOULD HAVE GOTTEN MY VOTE. THANK YOU FOR A WONDERFUL STORY.

I loved the story line, kept me fixed, and reading wanting to know what would happen next.

If this is just a sample of your word, DAMN you may just be the next Hemingway,,,LOL

I would Love to Read a Chapter 2 It's a great story Please add More to It. Keep up the Great Work.

I love that sandy is feminine. Every boy deserves to feel what it's like to be pretty.

You keep switching back and forth between first person and third erson narrative.

Either is fine, but both in the same story doesn't work.

Interesting story, though.

what a great story, I love it :-)

Best story I have ever read. It was emotional and had a great ending. I prefer stories with great ending. Movies to.