All Comments on 'Taken Ch. 01'

There could have been more.... Sex or a next chapter!

By the way, there are more chapters on the way! (And don't worry, the next chapter gets sexier.) I'm new to this, so please forgive me for being a little slow to submit new chapters.

<3 Tara

The build up sets the tone for the story so don't worry about leaping into the sex bits too quickly. We like a good psycho so make him as chilling as you want.

I can't wait to see what comes next, I hope he impregnates his gorgeous little virgin slave.

Cant wait to see what happens next!

Can't wait to read more. This is descriptive and enthralling. I'm hooked already

The build up in the story is so intriguing ... the foreplay (for lack of a better word) keeps me on the edge, hope you don't rush into the finally to quickly... you've written him to be a good psycho, so make him as chilling as you want.

I'm beginning to grow impatient waiting on part 3

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