All Comments on 'Taken Ch. 01'

Vegas, dear, welcome to Lit. A little helpful information for you - bdsm is a category for stories based on consent. Including bdsm type elements will not make it bdsm if kidnapping and force is involved. Even if you Stockholm Syndrome it to where she is begging to be his complete slave/slut/whore/cunt/cumdump/what ever-it will be poisoned by the begining.

Now, there IS a place for your story. There is an entire category especially for nonconsent/reluctance. There is an audience looking for just that. You can contact the moderators and have them move it over there.

Even in fantasy, a person who drugs, kidnaps, physically harms and I'm guessing rapes another isn't a master. They are a psychotic felon.

Get lost.

Although I do agree that it's in the wrong category this is what I was looking for when I didn't see what I wanted in non con. I'm looking forward to reading more regardless of category!

When we come to this site we aren't looking for a tease.....please deliver.

Everything I want in a kidnap story! Also, your writing style is poetic and I'm easily able to imagine the scenario.