Taken Ch. 06

PUBLIC BETA

Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.

You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.

Click here

"Don't you sass me boy! I am still head of this household, I haven't killed her yet and I am not about to let her talk to me like that anymore than I let any of you. Now you can either help me, or get out of my way Clyde." Mama yelled. Clyde stood, he towered almost 2 feet over his mother, and he was twice her size and definitely held more muscle while Mama was a little plumper around the middle.

Clyde lowered his head in submission and stepped aside, leaving me to face her. Her face was turning red with rage as she held the wooden spoon in one hand, she shuffled towards me and I backed up a few steps.

"Now child, take your lickin' like a good girl," she encouraged, crooking her old gnarled finger at me. I shook my head furiously, I knew I needed to be good, I needed their trust, but this was pushing it. I couldn't do this, I couldn't just bend over and allow this mean old woman humiliate me too. I looked to Clyde but he simply looked away shamefully; he wasn't going to do a damn thing either way. A pair of hands clasped my shoulders and I shrieked, elbowing Christopher who only dug his fingers into my shoulders.

"I'll hold her Mama." I wrestled against him, kicking out at the old lady but she kept her distance. She smiled, teeth yellowing with age beneath her paper thin lips. Her gray hair was still in a neat bun atop her head.

"Over the table Christopher," she ordered. Clyde quickly left the room and I felt sick to my stomach. Christopher held me close, hands wrapping around my biceps and pinning them down to my sides. He pushed me forward with his body as I planted my feet down, pushing back against him. He kicked my legs forward and I started to cry, I felt the table as he got closer and he shoved my face against the wood, bending me at the waist. Mama didn't hesitate she started to slap with that wooden spoon so hard it made me weak in the knees as I begged her to stop.

The old lady had no mercy; she was breathless and rattled. Strands of her long gray hair had come loose and she sat down in the nearest chair as she coughed a few times, struggling to catch her breath.

"Take her up to your room Christopher. Clyde, fetch me a pen and paper, I'll make you a list for your trip into town." I resisted the urge to rub my rear as Christopher led me down the hall and up the stairs to his room. I wanted to fight, I wanted to turn and rip his throat out with my teeth. I honestly wanted to run to Clyde and beg him not to leave; he'd had a point, he was the only one who cared if I lived or died and he was the only one willing to put his neck out to save me.

"Relax Skye, or you're going to turn this into a really long weekend." He chided as he shoved me into his room. I landed on all fours, catching myself before I landed face first and I turned to face him. He stood in the doorway, grinning predatorily. I clenched my fists, digging my nails into my palm as I stared at him. I wanted to badly to wipe that smile off his face and the pain helped me focus so that I didn't' give in to the baser instincts. He took a few steps into the room and watched as I backed up slowly until my back was against a wall, eyes never leaving his.

"We are going to have so much fun Skye," he chuckled, closing the door behind him.

12
Please rate this story
The author would appreciate your feedback.
  • COMMENTS
Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
23 Comments
jadewinchesterjadewinchesterabout 10 years agoAuthor
chp 7

I am trying i swear!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
waiting

Waiting for chapter 7 :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Love your series

This is a great series I read it on my phone can't get enough!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Desperately awaiting the next chapter- love this story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Clyde

I'm very interested in how you develop Clyde. I see a lot of potential for a caring protective husband in him he just needs to get out from his brainwashing insane family. I actually feel just as bad for Clyde as I do for Lindsay. Really hope Lindsay and Clyde can make it in the end. and Clyde can find that his family's way is wrong and protect the fragile love he has for his new bride. Great job in your writing and developing your characters (obviously I am a fan of Clyde). Can't wait to see their relationship develope into whatever its going to be! =D

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
story

what a yellow livered coward clyde is! Now what! is he going to let his brother rape her again! That so called man has no backbone at all, she's his wife! what a laugh she is nothing but a sex slave for him and his brother's. even the marriage isn't legal as she didn't give her consent no matter what they say.

jadewinchesterjadewinchesterabout 10 years agoAuthor
Thanks to all

I have been working hard on the next chapter. I appreciate all of you and your encouragement. i am trying to make this next chapter longer, as there wont be many left. I have had to reconfigure my entire plan as this is my first story i've "published" for anyone besides myself. Please be patient with me :D i hope to have chp 7 within the next week.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
too much pain.

I hope poor Lindsey can escape this is way too much for a young girl to suffer. I myself was in an abusive relationship and it was a real bad one for me. Ended up in hospital nearly dead . Thanks to my family I survived. But it's left its marks I can tell you. Mentally as well as physically.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
A rare find

I am enjoying this story a great deal, with or without the sex. I like how you developed the characters (and no I don't find the girl annoying). I wouldn't mind reading more about Clyde and Skye.. Great job and please keep writing!!

xxspicyshrimpxxxxspicyshrimpxxabout 10 years ago
Have to agree with Lucian

Love the story, I like how you're not making this a romance. But I have to agree with lucian, the protagonist can be annoying at times. Sometimes I just want to slap the chick for never keeping her mouth shut but I guess that comes with the territory of being 18. I just want her to be smart by winning people over to earn people's trust other than her husband. I remember high school, kids learn ass-kissing at an early age so she can find a way to have someone of influence in the house like her or her escape/survival will not be realistic and her husband ain't help her position he's only keeping her alive.

Show More
Share this Story

story TAGS

READ MORE OF THIS SERIES

Taken Ch. 05 Previous Part
Taken Series Info

Similar Stories

Captured Eighteen-year-old girl kidnapped and taken.in NonConsent/Reluctance
Intruder Ch. 01 Overpowered in her own home with no protection.in NonConsent/Reluctance
The Hell in Your Eyes A stalker's obsession reaches the point of no return.in NonConsent/Reluctance
The Taking of Lena Ch. 01 An innocent chambermaid is taken by a wealthy lord.in NonConsent/Reluctance
Love...and Love Intensely Ch. 01 She is taken, completely.in NonConsent/Reluctance
More Stories