All Comments on 'Taken For a Spin'

by hornynri

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LickideesplitLickideesplitabout 3 years ago
FTDS

I think there is more story to come ... at least there should be! There are some significant re-arrangements to be threshed out, but it sounds like they are willing to discuss those with some degree of objectivity and honesty. But I am SURE the Guru is not going to be a neutral arbiter ... for either of their interests. I was surprised there even really was a meteor shower.

davisabledavisableabout 3 years ago

Great buildup and I loved the realism. Looking forward to more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Very nice

Realistic dialogue...more, please! Five stars ⭐️ for this one.

pornaccount_22pornaccount_22about 3 years ago
Continue

Please continue the story....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Good story. An abrupt end. Why?

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Clearly, the wife is cheater by nature and the personalities of husband and wife don't match .Please continue the next part

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