All Comments on 'Taken from the Reunion'

I think that you have a very good start here. Keep going and writing. You have a talent for drawing the reader in, next time try to add a little more plot and insight to your characters to make it even more believable. I am sure that your next story will be just as good if not better. Thumbs up

On a 5'2" frame? A little too much for my taste. But good action.

Where's the husband? Or even any of the other relatives at the reunion? Home invasion guys have schedule that includes kid napping, rape and the return and release of the victims? I'm hoping you don't ever try writing again if you can't come up with some rationale for the action.