All Comments on 'Taken Wife Pt. 04'

Thanks for a wonderful L.W. story.Wish more wives were like this one.

One dimensional crap don't quit your day job.

That sums up this one. Leave husband for an abuser.

Really great series, but I feel like you really rushed that ending. The buildup to the dinner date and seduction was really hot and sexy. But then all of the sudden it all goes to hell. You really could have teased this out a little more. It's still a really great story, that deserves a more well thought out resolution.

Repressed homosexuals secretly enjoy being near a real man.

as suggested,

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. It could have gone a little slower but it was good. I loved how Dylan took possession of Jackie's pussy right in front of her husband and then had Jackie tell her husband who now owned her pussy. Since I enjoy stories about white girl/women taking the risk of getting black pregnant this story really hit the mark.

Fantastic story!!!!! Congratulations!!!

Sure, white wife becomes slutty with handsome black guy but we all go through phases. Once the thrill goes (it does!) the white couple should get back together and live like normal human beings. There is no need to make a wimp out of the husband or for the wife to become a different person just because of sex.

The story is great and can end here. Very enjoyable read and erotic despite not really exploring much into the relationship.

For a sequel you have the option of her becoming a real slut, or her realising some sort of mistake or him throwing her away at some future stage. She should enjoy herself no matter what.

Good Luck

Kill the cunt.

KILL you dear annony you worthless pig!

Most men are not wimps and the fact that Steven caught her in the act of cheating, he should have snuck out of bed room and came back with something that would have evened things our and he should have given Dylan the beating of his life and then I would not have stopped there, but proceeded to give her what she should have got a dam good beating too for her part in the affair. He should have started divorce proceedings and sue her Law Firm Company for not enforcing the sexual harassment of female employees and sued them for $20,000,000.00 and committing adultry

One in each of the 4 kneecaps, Then EXacto knife to fix the overpopulation problem, or reduce it, somewhat. Then call the cops live on the state's dime a few years. Get out and look ole scarred legs up and laugh at her.

Take this shit and shove it where the sun don't shine....sunshine! What crap this is! If you never write another word that would make this a better world!

I absolutely loved the story. I love that she gave him her wedding rings to hold. I hope that Dylan got her pregnant and her and her husband will raise it while she still dates Dylan.

racism of this site. But see Mudshark Madness for the realistic ends to BMWF relationships.

Ive seen a video along these lines. Its an interesting subject. Taking the BBC sex and cuck to another level. I like it, thanks for writing