All Comments on 'Taking Care of Mom Ch. 04'

Man it really felt like Rachel was using Brian at the end.

Brian and Rachel seem to be at a cross road. Expressing true feelings for each other would help them realize what they both want is right in front of them. Together, they reveal to their families their feelings for each other and move on together. More please!

Great storytelling kinky sex!! Thanks for sharing.

Don't leave us hanging, continue or provide closure please!

What is this ending?

I tend to write several stories at once, and Taking Care of Mom Ch. 05 is one that I'm working on. I finished the conclusion to One Look and Finally, and now I'm working on a few others. So, this is definitely not the end for Brian and Rachel. Thanks for reading.

Cheers,

Smuttyandfun

God, this was wonderful. Bring them back for a happy ending, please.

Great story, but hopefully there is another chapter where she moves to where he is going to school but ends up with another friend of Hal's that lives in Dubai. Much more daring_kinkier than Brian.

Didn’t like the end!!

Great story line!

Trusting you will have at keast a couple more chapters. 1) Rachel buying a Condo where he attends College 2) They have arguments with Hal and Parents, they split for a bit. Then they long fir each other and finally get married.

In any case looking forwRd to reading more of these 2.

Thank you!!

Great series so far. 5 stars.

However I am in a little state of confusion. The 2 times they had anal while she is on her knees how could his balls be slapping against her ass?

Oh please, we ALL want more, we need to know if they continue...

dick pics? Seriously? Behaving like a fucked up politician? Pretty much ruined what you had going earlier.

So sad there is no "Rest of the Story"