All Comments on 'Taking His Rightful Place - Final'

to bad we didnt see dad standing behind them as this was being said.

And I love the comment by the reader who wrote "Go for broke." Conner has got to fuck a baby up where he was once a baby, and "dad" has got to know it. It's a terrific idea to have dad slurp out Conner's cream from his mother's twat. It'll bring out dad's inner cocksucker, make him into the faggot he secretly yearns to be. Have dad give Conner's big hard cock some licks, kiss and lick Conner's heavy loaded balls, show everybody who's boss. While dad's busy between the boy's legs, mom'll be watching and strumming her clit, waiting for another cuntal attack from her big strong son.

I thought you would have got better and wrote the final chapters better than the first on most occasions when there is more than 1 in a story it gets better a little in the later chapters are at least stays the same but in this case they got worse and what kind of ending was this how the hell can you even think this story is finished ask any decent writer about what you did wrong in this story and I promise they say pretty much the same thing I said after chapter 1 plus a lack of a proper ending I hope you other stories are not like this