by Kajirah
But this is an excellent story. I was fascinated by Kate and everything that happened to her. I can't wait to read more. Thanks for taking the time to write such a wonderful story.
The story continues as good as the first part. Hope more to come. Why is it that women write the hottist erotic stories?
your writing is amazing. this story (and part 1) is so hot and so passionate without the typically vulgar words. this is the fantasy that fuels my dreams. please add to the story ... who is he?
This one was lacking in some small way. I don't know if it is simply that it wasn't as much rape as simple release of pent up frustration. I believe that Kate could and would have built more into this, but then I am not Kate.
I love the detail and the passion. Keep 'em coming
i have always loved this story the only thing could say is this is one of them wish she would at very least tell him off cause yes she does like it ect but it is still rape I guess just wish with some of these stories wish to see a little remorse from the guy you don't see that in the stories to much hope that makes sense what saying