by MountainDewMan
Damn I miss your stories this is still one of my all time faves even though it's been more than a year since you last published a story.
Yeah, nothing puts a mother who is worried about her son's safety at ease quite like riding a motorbike without protective gear. :P
Oh mummy !! So ( H ) ardent. Poor Mike what'll happen to the girlfriend's now. First time I've read this loved it .
Great read, tanks 5 stars.
Given it 5 stars as a very sound basis for a story and very well written in most parts. I know it's fiction but there are too many errors as described by others which make it far fetched in places, and IMO it's far too short. With a bit more detail and some background and twists and turns leading up to the climaxic??? bike ride this could easily become an excellent story. Hope you're planning a sequel with more details when they get back home; perhaps you could use that to retrace back through to the history, etc.
I don't recollect reading any of your other stories so will be looking through them with interest. Keep on writing.
Liked this one too, although it did go from 0 to 60 in like 4.5 seconds!
Well done, and a nice start. Now for Chapter 2, and revenge against hubby,,,
Why do you keep GOD being damned, if it was not for HIM this would have never happend. Thanks for another great read.
SO she's pushed up against him ... Yet the seat rubs against her clit?
WOW! A medical marvel. No wonder women laugh at so many men 'who can't find it.'
I took My Aunt for a ride .. Lets just say She became My Nearest Aunt .
very hot, i would have liked a little more teasing on the bike before the denouement, get his mother wetter slowly teasing
can't wait for a part two
has he an aunt
a gran
a sister
His own mom called him an SOB? I liked the story, but I found that part hilarious
Fantastic story, I used to bring my fifty-six year old Mother off on my motorcycle, but I never got to fuck her, tragically she died only two years later. We lived in an old country cottage, and followed the country practice of undressing for bed downstairs. So I would flash my mum night and morning. She had me circumcised at the age of fourteen, unusual in England, at the time, only 12% of english boys were cut.Mum was very sexy, and I knew quite a lot off the local men had fucked her. She once told me that I had a huge cock, this surprised me as i was sure she had seen much bigger cock's than mine. I deeply regret not being able to fuck my mother, as I am sure that she would have agreed, and I am sure that once started, we would have carried on. I would have certainly encouraged all my friends to fuck her.
-38D's with no sag on a 48 year old?
-She was able to smell and bite his back through a full-faced helmet? (Couldn't have been an open helmet given her surprise that she could speak to and hear him).
-He talks dirty to her, fully expecting she's going to orgasm on the ride, but then throws in a "what about dad" when he's getting what he wanted?
-And the always "dad is cheating with his secretary" go-to excuse.
Now that the sexy motorcycle ride is over, it's time for a sexy ride in mother's bed. If Mike is going to fuck his mother face-to-face, give him a bit of sexy chest hair for that hard muscular chest -- something she can "feel" as she clings to his chest riding the motorcycle next time! Mom enjoyed touching his abs and his nipples -- imagine a dusting or coating of hair!
A refreshing take on the,"taboo,"genre. Fairly plausible but in spite of the fact a lot of the authors on here fancy themselves literary geniuses most of us need proofreaders.
Other than that, 4 stars.
If Harley Davidson would post this on their web site their sales would skyrocket!!!
Great story, well paced and believable.
5*s
Smut writer, tell a story, not just a fuck scene. Also they definetely would be arrested if they fucked in a grocery store parking lot. Stupid story.
Or a beta reader! The spelling and grammar errors abound.
This would have been a four or five start story if you had done some spell checking.
So that's why I see so many women in their 60's and older riding motorcycles who live on my street. They just crave a giant vibrator between their legs....
"hello maa'm can i interest you in a motorcycle ride that your privates part will never forget.......
Does the same work for older men in their 70's....imagine your grandpa wearing only biker chaps...and sporting a major woody.
So fucking hot! A followup chapter would be great where they cuckold dad and fuck right in front of him. Five stars and a favorite point!