All Comments on 'Taking My Daughter To Vail'

one of the best i've read. great story, great writing skill bringing the reader into the room as a observer.

Kritstin's affection for and deep attachment to her Dad comes through very well!

Very, very well written and just incredibly hot. Read it at my desk and now I can't get up!

Love to read more

Awesome build up to a very hot, erotic story. Can't wait to read more, please continue.

Very sexy and hot story

So good I'm only sorry it didn't go on much much longer! If there is to be a follow-up, I'd love to see it take advantage of Kristen's exhibitionist tendencies - taking her out to clubs, dancing, etc. dressed to kill.

I love your writing and can't wait to read your other stories

Sincerly i have never read such a smashing incest story.it took all my strength to carry on reading, with an able to drive nails rock hard tool, stretching my fabric.

You have a real skill for creating atmosphere without being too wordy. Great pacing, you keep the narrative on track, building tension. You even managed to give them a second climax without just reverting to a 'jack' story. Well done.

wow what a very hot horny story. love this one so much would love another part or parts,. the story was brilliany. the writing out of this world more please more.

simply hot and well written...but you cant leave it at this more....want to see where you take them

This was an excellent one and i have read alot! They should keep having sex in and keep it a secret, some tit fucking, sperm loads shooting over her face. Pregancy too. They can cover it up. More chapters

hot! Can't wait for the weather to warm up enough for them to take it out to the balcony, or to some mountaintop! Thanks

Rachel I love your deliciously dirty mind! This is a great story that leads me to fantasize about the possibilities....I've got a beach trip planned with my daughter now that is a stunning 35 yr old red head....

Three thumbs up