All Comments on 'Taking Shawna Stevens Ch. 03'

To short has tons of room for a father and son ownership complete with markings, Tats and maybe piercings. Great work. fun fantasy.

Just a quick fix to keep us poor readers addicted ... and unfulfilled.

This writer obviously enjoys being a tease(r)

;-)

This was going so well, best one yet, but I m not such a fun of the dad getting involved.

Shawna needs black mistress to domesticate her into a submissive slut for BBC and properly licking black cunts.

To short but the father should have come in the next story. But the way you made the father sounds like he knows the husband and would not approve of what is happening

Thanks so much for sharing such a great story!

I love these stories, but they are waaaaaay to short. Average story (even with multiple chapters) is closer to 1500 words. Keep up the good work, but add some character background, motivation and longer sex scenes.